Hi, this week for poetry we wrote a poem about marshmallows this is mine:
Marshmallows:
On the outside you look like:
- as fluffy as a pillow
-a big soft cloud
-a mini cake
On the outside you sound like:
- when tapped like a pillow
- a crackling fire
- a baby's bottom
on the outside you feel like:
- a small powdery surface
- as wobbly as jelly
- very sticky
On the outside you smell like:
- as amazing as Heaven
- sugary goodness
- a candy shop
On the inside you taste like:
- like heaven
- sweet as a lollipop
- soft and squishy
Neve, well done on your marshmellow poem, it is good to see you thinking about your senses.
ReplyDeleteMiss Gill.
Thank you miss Gill
Deletegood job Neve I really liked you marshmellow poem you had some really good ideas.
ReplyDeleteAri
Thanks Ari I like yours too.
Deletehi Neve your poem is great i love it and i love marshmellow to
ReplyDeleteThanks Ainsley yours is great too.
DeleteHi Neve!
ReplyDeleteKeep up the good work!
From The Epic Nia!