Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Monday, April 6, 2020
How I broke my finger
Have you ever broken a bone if so what bone?
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Hi Neve,
ReplyDeletePoor you, hurting your finger. How is it feeling now?. You wrote a great recount of how it happened.You made it interesting by using lots of different sentence starters and by adding in your feelings.
Well done
Mrs Roach
Hi Neve
ReplyDeleteSorry to hear about your finger.
I have broken all the bones in my feet once in an exercise class which you used a step. When I jumped on the box it dipped over and I heard a crack which I thought was my ankle. I could not walk so had to crawl to the car.
Is this the first bone you have broken?
Hi neve I hope you are alright.I have never broken a bone before.
ReplyDeleteHi Neve,
ReplyDeleteNo I haven't brocken any of my bones and can you say hi to Ari for me!
i fractured my leg
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