A few days ago we wrote post cards pretending we were at the signing of the treaty heres mine
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Thursday, March 25, 2021
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Hi Neve its saffy I really liked your postcard I liked how you added lots of peoples names and I liked how you told me that it took a long time for everybody to sign the Treaty
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ReplyDeleteHi Neve I love your post card you have a really good piece of writing and I have made a postcard I love how you have who it is from and I hope you are happy with your Work what was your favourite part on this post card
ReplyDeleteProberly the part when i said that it took a long time for everyone to sign the treaty whats yours?
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ReplyDeleteYour blog post was really good this week I liked how you made it look like the old post cards. Maybe next time on your blog you could tell us a little bit more about you work.
Ari